Ella 100WC – Week 5

I tripped down the old wooden stairs to get down to the basement. A few had holes in them, seeing that the house was old. As I looked around I saw lots of boxes. They looked ancient. I didn’t want to touch any, but I felt attracted to a certain box that sat in the corner. The floorboards creaked with every step I took. The box was labelled with “positively do  not open” but I had to. I tugged the lid open revealing creepy dolls. I was about to pick up a doll when I heard mumbled whispers behind me.

2 thoughts on “Ella 100WC – Week 5

  1. You’ve created such a creepy, exciting story with your use of description. I can imagine the scene very vividly. Well done for choosing more imaginative verbs like ‘trip’ and ‘tug’ to build up the atmosphere. Now, of course, I want to know who’s doing the whispering.

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