Cecilia 100WC – Week 38

The scorching hot suns rays sliced through me like a hot blade. I stumbled through the abandoned desert, unsure if I was going to make it out of there alive. Three weeks without food or water, had left me practically dead. I had been surviving on only my high hopes of finding my lovely lost brother. He had been lost for 1 month, and I was willing to do anything to help find him.  Suddenly I collapsed, I need to keep going I told myself, but it was far too hot for me to keep going…What could I do?

3 thoughts on “Cecilia 100WC – Week 38

  1. Hi Cecilia, thanks for submitting to 100wc. I really like this story and would love to know what happens next! I especially like your use of a simile ‘like a hot blade’ and the way you have ended with a question. Well done!

    Jacqui (Team 100)

  2. Dear Jacqui,

    Thanks for your comment, I really appreciate it. I can’t wait to write more 100WC throughout the year!

    From
    Cecilia ;D

  3. Hi Cecilia,
    i really like your story. Well done! I like how you put the question in at the end. great work!!!

    Sophie

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