Shaun 100WC – Week 30

It was mothers day 5:30a.m.I was baking a cake for mum.She was snoring her head of so it was a good idea to do as a surprise. I grabbed the recipe book and went straight to chocolate cake.I went to the cupboard to get the ingredients and when I opened the cupboard door I saw a horrible sight.I was staring straight into a big black rats eyes.It was nibbling cheese.I started to see it twitch.I t looked me and leaped. I was scared for getting rabies.Yuck foaming mouth.

2 thoughts on “Shaun 100WC – Week 30

  1. Hi Shaun,

    I really liked the adjectives you used in your writing and you also included some really creative verbs, like twitch and leaped!
    I hope this wasn’t a true story and that you have something special planned for Mother’s Day!

    From Miss T 🙂

  2. Hi Miss T,
    It’s not a true story so lucky!
    I don’t think we have something for mum but my sister, dad and I have got her some presents.
    Shaun 🙂

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