Maggie 100WC – Week 26

The Perfect Day

The sun was shining down onto the frosty farmland. The mountains in the background screaming with happiness. Summer woke up with a smile on her face, she knew this was going to be a good day. She ran out onto the field with the fluffy sheep. “Look up! Can you see the clouds?” she whispered. Summer lay back onto the dry, crusty grass looking for some clouds. She found all sorts of things monkeys, dogs, flowers, etc. As Summer stood up her perfect day suddenly turned into her worst nightmares. A razor fang bit into her leg injecting the poison…


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  1. Hi Maggie, you have used some great descriptive words that really help your reader imagine your setting. I am not sure what you mean by mountains ‘screaming with happiness’ though, can you think of another word to convey your meaning? Wow, what a sudden ending which totally changed the tone of the passage.

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