Joseph 100WC – Week 26

NIGHT WORK

I was on a night walk with all my mates.They where Will,Julian,Jesse and charlie. The track we walked on was all broken paths with weeds on them.The atmosphere was all gloomy and scary.

We were all freaked out.. We could all hear loads of noises from the trees. we just kept walking and holding each other. we saw a building we were tempted to go in the building. It creeped all of us out. we just couldn’t go in so we all walked along.some one shouted out”look up can you see.No we cant.

One thought on “Joseph 100WC – Week 26

  1. Great story this week, your descriptive words really help to create suspense for the reader. I would have mentioned what noises were heard. Well done.

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