Breianna 100WC – Week 26

So when I was doing my work (when my friends were on school camp) on my computer in my google drive doing the 100WC. Something came up on my screen. It said “YOU HAVE WON A IPHONE” I clicked on it and 3 seconds later I was I was well I was in the computer. It was like a town. I went to a house and the people there said “ look up! Can you see it coming”. I had no idea what that meant. But I kept on asking. So I decided to say it and I returned back at school.

2 thoughts on “Breianna 100WC – Week 26

  1. I love the idea of this story. It reads a little like you are talking though, so it would be good to puncutate it a little more to help the reader follow.

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