Toms 100WC – Week 25

THE LAST FLIGHT

I was on a flight to Malaysia with my family on a holiday  and I was in a really good mood to have a holiday after a exhausting year at school. I was looking out at the sea and beside my was and old lady and she looked cranky and also nice but when she lifted the lid  I suddenly heard a  sparkling sound outside the plane. I was scared with shock after hearing that sound. There  was fire on the engines and the passengers on the plane were panicking even me. Is this the end of I going to die and would we make it………………

One thought on “Toms 100WC – Week 25

  1. Toms I like how your story started out on such a high note but then the adventure begins! And leaving the ending as a cliffhanger makes it even more exciting. Nice work using the prompt and writing on the 100WC.

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