Shaun 100WC – Week 24

Pinocchios iPhone 5S

ONCE UPON A TIME Geppetto Pinocchios father was making some more wood toys. He made an wooden iPhone 5S and he gave it to pinocchio as a present.He added all his friends on messages ready to have fun. That day when he went to school he wrote a nasty message to his best-friend that said:”YOU’RE a FAT, FATTY”. Pinocchio went home that day very happy of himself but then his nose started rapidly growing longer and longer until!

CRACK!He had broken his iPhone 5S.He was extremely  disappointed in himself for lying to his friends about them.


3 thoughts on “Shaun 100WC – Week 24

  1. Very interesting story also very funny that he lied to his friends about themselves
    Great grammer keep writing great stories-Ross

  2. Hi Shaun,

    Thank you for entering the 100 Word Challenge this week, you really have brought the story of Pinocchio into the 21st century with a wooden IPhone!
    Interesting that his character hadn’t changed, hopefully if he was disappointed in himself he’ll start changing his ways!
    Well done.
    Mrs Stones – Bradford, U.K.

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