Callum 100WC – Week 23

It was a hot sunny day and the workers all got to work. I jumped in the drill and started to drill a new mine. I started and I was so nervous because this is my first time using it. I started pushing though the earth. I found gold in about ten minutes and I was happy about my discovery. I jumped out of the drill and and started to dig it out. Then I started again and it went on and on for hours. At the end of the day everybody went home to their families. But I couldn’t.

4 thoughts on “Callum 100WC – Week 23

  1. Hello

    I don’t think I could go home if I had discovered gold! Good response to the prompt.
    When you read the piece again, you may feel that you have started too many sentences with ‘I …..’. Could you think of other ways of expressing what you want to say? If so, your writing would be even better.
    Keep up the good work.

  2. GOOD JOB CALLUM!

    I really like how you found the gold I got excited. I would never go home if I found gold.

    Excellent work
    Fraser

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